اّلو من سنين
بذرة حنين
فى ارض اجدادى اترمت
و اّلت كمان
ايام زمان
قصتنا من هناك ابتدت
حب و حنان
عشق المكان
فى ارض احبابى نبت
شجرة وفا
تشق السما
فى حضن امتنا اتسقت
زملا ف كفاح
شمس و صباح
فى ارض عروبتنا حرت
نرمى البذور
تخرج جذور
فو عمق ثقافتنا تمسكت
حبنا لبعضنا
دقات قلبنا
من قلب الصخور سرت
و هتف بينا صوت
بلاش السكوت
و ف التو قامت رنت
نحو المكان
الىٍ زمان
بذرتنا ف ارضه اترمت
و اّلت كمان
أيام زمان
رحلتنا من هناك ابتدت
Written : 14/1/2000
3 comments:
gamda awy begad, masha'allah, I like your style geddan, bas ana besara7a day3a fel arabic potry ya3ny, English is my favourite...
Keep it up, waiting for more :-)
wow that is really nice! i like it a lot! it is pretty
Steliano,
Thanks for the words that I am sure I don't deserve half of them :-)
about el "wazn" , I knew it may be broken, but actually , I didn't care much.
when I wrote that stuff all I cared for is to represent some kind of strange feelings I had inside me, I didn't know much about "wazn" at that time as I was just a kid , but also I didn't give it that importance.
In my definition, true emotions build good poem, right "wazn" makes it musical and make it really poetry, I just cared for the second part, as all I cared for is to represent myslef as I feel.
By the way, thanks for being honest, I published after 6 years to know what others really think, and believe me I was so pleased by your comment :-)
Waitting for your work to be published too,and for the answer of the question posted on your blog !! :-)
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