السلاح شفى الجراح
حمى السلام رد اللى راح
على ارض سينا عمرى راح
فدا و تمن ادفعه بسماح
ترابها احمر صبغه دمى
اللى ف سبيلها سال و ساح
خطفها غاصب من جوه قلبى
و ساب فى قلبي كل الجراح
انا و زمايلى عايشين فى ذرة
رجعت بدمى دم فلاح
صونوها دايما و لا تفرطوا
في شبر من ارض الجراح
و يوم م تروح احس فعلا
ان عمرى هباء راح
انا الشهيد عايش ممتش
اموت بحق لو راح السلاح
انا الشهيد شايف بلادى
سابت عدوى ارضى استباح
سامع السكوت حاسس القنوط
بعد م كان الصوت صداح
لو تبقى امتي على حالها ساكتة
احس انى فعلا عمرى راح
Didication to those who gave
much and we didn't even
remember them well in the day
they passed away, to those who
gave much back in 1967,
thousands of free innocent souls.
Written 29/2/2000
8 comments:
wallahy enta ya 3am adeeb lazem tekteb fe el garayed
ركيك جدا وملئ بالاخطاء النحوية وواضح ان الشعر لايناسبك .. اسمع نصيحتى وابحث عن ادوات اخرى تعبر بها عن نفسك .. نصيحة لوجه الله .. امسح التعليق بعد ماتقرا النصيحة
Steliano, thanks for your kind comment :)
I will see you more often after the exams and graduation project to make major updates in here
anonymous, Thanks for the comment and for commming here anyway
Why do you think I should delete your comment? do you think i am that egyptian that I want all the voices to be with me ? why don't I have a voice against me ?
ok,few points now:
1- I didn't say I write good poetry, I only promised to write what I really feel, no more no less.
2- the one who wrote that stuff was 16 years old, remember that always.
3- this is "3ameya", what grammar mistakes are you talking about ? !!! by the way back about 7 years ago I recieved a special prize for excellence in my arabic grammar!! so just believe me if I want to throw you with blocks of very accurate arabic words,I can and you will spend the rest of your life trying to understand what I wrote :D
4- I believe whenever you try to care on how good the melody looks in your words, you just start to lie, and I am totally convinced that being true is the most important point.
finally, you are so welcome to throw me with your comments anytime, having different opinion doesn't hurt, and execuse me that I will continue writting in all ways as I believe that I write for myself, I get out feelings caged in my soul, so it is not that much important if people don't like them :D
Free soul..
GOSh i'vee been taken by it!!
thanks 4 sharing this piece.. its VERY cool fe3lan..
و بقولك حاجة.. فى برنامج ع الراديو للمواهب الشابة.. ما تشارك بالشعر دا.. أنا متأكدة إنه هيتناقش لك قريب
عموما.. إنت ممكن تروح موقع البرنامج
http://culturalworkshop.slangonline.com/
و شوف الناس عاملة إيه..
و كمان إسمع البرنامج ذات نفسه على
the european local service of radio caior.. 95.4 fm
كل حد، من الساعة 11 بليل
*هو بالإنجليزى على فكرة*
و قولى إيه رأيك
lasto adri, how is your exams :D
thanks for the support, especially after the heavy stones of the anoneymous friend (who doesn't look so much friendly anyway :D)
I will listen to the program, you know being unemployed give you good time to do things !!
I will be seeing you around as I have nothing really to do now , ana saye3 rasmy :(
post that piece ya free soul..
post it.. its cool bgad
أنا مش مع الشخص اللي ما كتبش إسمه
أيا كان الأسلوب ركيك فمن حق الإنسان أن يعبر عن نفسه حتى لو كان أهتم
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